kastemel Posted July 18, 2013 Share Posted July 18, 2013 Hey everyone. I wanted to let you guys know that I've started a new comic on deviant art. It's a semi-realistic comic about relationships and feederism. For those that remember my older stuff, this is a stand alone story, no background necessary. I just finished the first short chapter, I'm doing the pencils for chapter 2 now. You can find it here http://kastemel.deviantart.com/gallery/44774585, or read it below. Let me know what you guys think! S77 and xXWWhiteXx 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pregnantstuffer Posted July 18, 2013 Share Posted July 18, 2013 Fantastic!!!! Great comic so far!!! I cant wait to see where it goes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kastemel Posted July 18, 2013 Author Share Posted July 18, 2013 And a preview for the next chapter: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matt L. Posted July 18, 2013 Share Posted July 18, 2013 Very cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dsadas Posted July 18, 2013 Share Posted July 18, 2013 Awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest DonnyLBE Posted July 18, 2013 Share Posted July 18, 2013 Nice :thumbsup: are you still going to continue the WGI comic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
berserker1 Posted July 18, 2013 Share Posted July 18, 2013 Glad to see you back Kastemel, I´m a big fan of your work, which was some of the first contact I had with this fetish and made me realize my preferences. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quizzmaster Posted July 18, 2013 Share Posted July 18, 2013 The bodies are great but the noses are sorta weird. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
montuemon Posted July 18, 2013 Share Posted July 18, 2013 Hooray!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inkman Posted July 18, 2013 Share Posted July 18, 2013 Great to have you back ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kastemel Posted July 18, 2013 Author Share Posted July 18, 2013 Nice :thumbsup: are you still going to continue the WGI comic? I tried several times to go back to it, but I never was able to maintain interest. I think my sensibilities have changed since then and the direction I had planned for WGIU just didn't do it for me anymore. I'd like to tell more one-off stories with beginnings and ends. Once I got the idea for Eclipse I just had to do it. I'm keeping it short and finite on purpose so I can actually finish it. If I can think of a good story for my older characters, I might revisit them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 18, 2013 Share Posted July 18, 2013 I'm so excited you're back! I can't wait to see your new work (though I wouldn't mind you revisiting Heather). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garlic Posted July 19, 2013 Share Posted July 19, 2013 Ideal. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen Victoria Posted July 19, 2013 Share Posted July 19, 2013 I like your style, and think this is top-notch work. Unfortunately, I'm not so keen on the story. And this isn't even a critique of the way the story is written. It's just... it seems almost like propaganda. While I understand there are many FAs and Feeders out there who are very supportive, I think the vast majority are a little more... uh... pushy about the weight thing once they 'come out.' And I don't mean heavy handed or forcing... but more along the line of grabbing a girl by the ass and saying something naughty about how big it's gotten; slapping her on the thigh and calling her a name, etc. It's also really hard for me to believe that an FA would seek out a thin girl, encourage her to gain, and then she'd turn around and actually do it. Wouldn't he naturally be drawn to a fat chick? Wouldn't she be slightly harder to convince? The whole 'weight gain love story' thing that isn't the least bit risqué is... well, it's difficult to fap too, to be totally honest. I kept waiting for the other chick to drag her into a stall and they make out. Or perhaps the ex is jealous, gives up her weight loss and gets competitive with the new girlfriend. You know? Something slightly off-color that gets the blood pumping. Anyway, it's your comic -- I'm just tossing out thoughts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flover321 Posted July 19, 2013 Share Posted July 19, 2013 this comic is fantastic, great work!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kastemel Posted July 19, 2013 Author Share Posted July 19, 2013 I'm sorry you found the first chapter dry. It's setup for other fun stuff, I promise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dsadas Posted July 19, 2013 Share Posted July 19, 2013 I thought it was awesome and I really liked the story line. I'm in a long term relationship with a very skinny girl (She is 5'6" and 115 lbs soaking wet) so being an FA a story like this is kind of a fantasy of mine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nate Posted July 19, 2013 Share Posted July 19, 2013 Awesome comic! Im really enjoying it, can not wait to see more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mothy Posted July 19, 2013 Share Posted July 19, 2013 I like your style, and think this is top-notch work. Unfortunately, I'm not so keen on the story. And this isn't even a critique of the way the story is written. It's just... it seems almost like propaganda. While I understand there are many FAs and Feeders out there who are very supportive, I think the vast majority are a little more... uh... pushy about the weight thing once they 'come out.' And I don't mean heavy handed or forcing... but more along the line of grabbing a girl by the ass and saying something naughty about how big it's gotten; slapping her on the thigh and calling her a name, etc. I think we hear about the pushy ones, but in practice I think a lot of men's personalities are such that they are either 1) afraid that being pushy at all will screw it up, and/or 2) conflicted for lots of reasons I won't get into here, such that they won't be so over-the-top about it, and/or 3) not aggressive and not inclined toward calling girls naughty names and being grabby I don't know many people who do the things you describe, except on the internet and in fiction. Maybe I hang out with a different crowd, and I'm fine with that. It's also really hard for me to believe that an FA would seek out a thin girl, encourage her to gain, and then she'd turn around and actually do it. Wouldn't he naturally be drawn to a fat chick? Wouldn't she be slightly harder to convince? You seem to presume that "most people" have an experience of the fetish that is the same as yours, and I don't think that's true. Some people prefer the gain, some people prefer the fat itself. For example - I like girls of all sizes; I'm mostly interested in the shape and the gain. I don't really have a preference for fat over thin, or vice-versa. The whole 'weight gain love story' thing that isn't the least bit risqué is... well, it's difficult to fap too, to be totally honest. I kept waiting for the other chick to drag her into a stall and they make out. Or perhaps the ex is jealous, gives up her weight loss and gets competitive with the new girlfriend. You know? Something slightly off-color that gets the blood pumping. I suppose each has his own way, but I disagree. I think this story is getting straight to the root of a fantasy that is meaningful to a lot of people. The off-color stuff that often appears in weight-gain fiction almost always just gets in the way. Anyway: I'm really, really glad that kastemel is back and sharing new work with us. It's terrific! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kastemel Posted July 19, 2013 Author Share Posted July 19, 2013 I don't want to say too much about it, but Chris' behavior was written very deliberately. I don't think you'll be disappointed if you keep reading, Queen Vic, but that's up to you. I appreciate the criticisms as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest mrgl Posted July 19, 2013 Share Posted July 19, 2013 While I understand there are many FAs and Feeders out there who are very supportive, I think the vast majority are a little more... uh... pushy about the weight thing once they 'come out.' And I don't mean heavy handed or forcing... but more along the line of grabbing a girl by the ass and saying something naughty about how big it's gotten; slapping her on the thigh and calling her a name, etc. t's also really hard for me to believe that an FA would seek out a thin girl, encourage her to gain, and then she'd turn around and actually do it. Wouldn't he naturally be drawn to a fat chick? Wouldn't she be slightly harder to convince? Stupid stereotypes. I always prefered thin girls who are getting fat, over fat ones from the start. This is the story with my girlfriend, she has started out thin and now is quite chubby. And I can't be pushy about her weight gain... it's too risky. Kastemel don't listen to him and write your own story, for now it's really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matt L. Posted July 19, 2013 Share Posted July 19, 2013 I so agree with mrgl, write your story the way you feel it should be written. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patcleburne Posted July 20, 2013 Share Posted July 20, 2013 Kastamel.....Great start on the comic.....Thanks for the others which are among the Very Best....and don't let the crowd of backseat drivers cause you to swerve....your stories are your stories, your art is your art, and I for one am completely happy with your sizable contribution to the genre. How about some others try their hands... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest srofofo Posted July 21, 2013 Share Posted July 21, 2013 I'm so happily surprised to see this post. Great art and story line. This is shaping up to be my new favorite comic. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thesloth Posted July 21, 2013 Share Posted July 21, 2013 THE RETURN OF KASTEMEL!!! Yeeeesssss... Great weekend! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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