mde13

Nice work! I like the take on the middle of the story. Like Kim is subconsciously predicting her downfall . Would love to read more of the Kim story post prom catastrophe. Kim's interaction with the students she used to torment would be interesting. Your scene description is very good.

Really enjoyed this! would love to see Kim's karma from other students she bullied over the years.

I have a few different idea's circulating. I'm not the best writer but would love for some body to bring an idea to life. For eg the epic Kim story https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zYs2AbjMwqtx_c1edDVOg8xAI4U430Llr8yMowVMiak/edit?usp=sharing is one of my favorites and am looking for tales in that vane.

“Practical Joke” by Greinskyn This is an extremely promising, realistic(ish) revenge and role-reversal story involving a classic girls’ “fat camp” set up, including the all-but-obligatory snide, overbearing camp counselor. While the set-up sounds like a cliché, as is usually the case for this sort of stuff, it’s the execution rather than the premise that makes the story great. Unfortunately, after a wonderful set-up, the story ends right when everything was converging towards a climax. I would love to see this story finished. One of my all time favorties!

In her own words

Steph is trying to get comfortable in her new skin. You can see the dejection on her face. A far cry from the fit motivational girl.

Her past posts tell a different story .

Steph telling us she has always had thick thighs.

Says she’s on an all carb diet 🙂

Who is Sara?

Great addition. I’d love to see more. It would be Interesting to see how her friends treat her, especially after the prom debacle