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Yasmina Howard, the well rounded tennis player . Part 1. Feedback appreciated!
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Yasmina Howard, the well rounded tennis player . Part 1. Feedback appreciated!
jdt replied to Anderssonson's topic in Stories
This is very well written and detailed. My only nitpick is that 137 lbs doesn't seem like much to have a full beer belly for an athlete. On the other hand, I love that the amount gained is kept realistic. I can't wait to read more about Yasmina and hopefully other stories from you. Great job!