Mafia_Puppet

Made a DST character. If anyone is interested, check it out~

Hi! Anyone want to join an anonymous, text-based ERPG over roll20? System is Fate Accelerated. We're meeting every Sunday night American and starting today. There are some common sense requirements about writing ability and people skills, but I like to think I'm pretty open to people who like naughty roleplaying Unfortunately, one of our members dropped out last minute and I'm trying to hurry and find a replacement. If you're interested, post here or send me a PM. Thanks for your time!

Anyone with an opinion worth hearing doesn't offer it unsolicited over the internet. It takes some people a long time to learn to accurately evaluate the worth of the people they deal with. Rather than trying to thicken your kid's skin, you should help her recognize that just because someone says something about her, it isn't necessarily worth a single fuck. I think anyone that was gifted with any real education can tell the difference between real criticism and the vitriolic bullshit that kids today have to sift through. The problem kids have is that they overvalue the worth of that vitriol. It takes a specific, adult understanding about the nature of people to look at something hateful and be truly indifferent. As a parent, you should teach your kid that. It's possible. There are high school kids that understand it perfectly, and there are grown adults that still shit themselves with rage when someone says something they don't agree with.

You don't get to use the real life excuse when you've been paid to do something. The rl excuse is "I have to do this other stuff because if I don't I starve and die." Metal is using the "I already spent your money and enough time has passed that I no longer feel obligated to do anything" excuse. I didn't pay him because IMO his art is terrible, but I don't see how any real adult could look at the way he conducted himself and still take him seriously. The people who still respect him are probably college students, NEETs, or shut-ins. You know, the people who are still stuck with the high-school mentality that your reputation is worth more than your ability to return on a contract. Not that it matters, but I doubt he'll ever manage to steal anyone's money again. Even perverts aren't that gullible =P

Great story. Short and to the point. You keep the story focused and just about everything in it works towards the same goal. Really good job. Just, uh, don't double space and disable html formatting or something to let the text fill the page. This isn't high school and you're not making your story look any better with awful bloat formatting.

Mollycoddles and Observer are where the quality is at. They know how to write an erotic short story; just about every line they bother to include is titillating. Even characterization and dialogue, which they do properly and without making me groan, is only included in combination with erotic bits. Concision in style, precision in thought. They're the only writers where you don't have to skip the first half of the story, because you can trust them to fucking do their job. ;D ID's old stuff is also pretty good. But each new work seems to get longer and more intellectual, with less smut in between.