I have a great deal so far through the 6 chapters. I keep going back to your old stories and your descriptions. I just wish VR had one more scene before the final feeding, where it was clear the formerly fit girl was the fatter one and it might have been fun to see her conditioning in VR see her respond to attention she wouldn't have before. I could picture her sleeping through an appointment with her fancy stylist and having to seek a new one out, maybe across from an increasingly familiar ice cream place or fast food ** the fat girl once frequented and she walks into the salon, maybe the fat girl's old one, and asks if the stylist has any appointments unaware of how different her style might emerge and how the gossip of the thick girls in the salon changes her and her perception of herself. Maybe even encouraging her to shop at a plus size shop next door since none of her old stuff fits, as she needs some size 20s in the mean time to get around and what size does it matter if it's exercise wear, she'll end up slimming out of it soon she rationalizes or lies to herself, unaware she'll be back for bigger ones soon, maybe while holding a cinnabon or a milkshake.